Hello! I really liked your pitch today. It was relatable, and well-rehearsed. Definitely one of my favorites! I really like the fact that you appeal to customers' emotions to sell your product. Based on your presentation today, I don't have any comments to make other than to advise you to keep practicing to make it flow even better. Good luck!
Hi! I was not able to see the slides, but I liked how you presented. I think that at the beginning you should say something additional about the team. Is there anything in your team that makes you specially strong? Be careful with the presentation. When there are too many people presenting it can get messy from time to time, so just be careful with that. Overall, excellent work and good luck the Tuesday!
Jae Seong Yoo thank you for the nice comments! I really enjoyed your presentation as well. Omar, thank you for reminding me to upload the slides. We are still currently finishing up some final touches. As for the introduction to the team, Rick told us to keep it short and save time to use it on our product/go to market strategy. We will clean up the presenting! Pied Piper appreciates the quick feedback.
Hi! In general, I think the overall flow of the pitch is great. It appears that all of you have a good knowledge of the assigned parts and have alot of things that you want to say. Yet, the clip is a little bit longer than our expected 1+5 minutes pitching. I believe if you take out the time to walk into the screen and other small moments where time was wasted you guys should be fine. But just in case, you might want to reduce the total pitch length as it seems to be wise to have some buffer time (which can be wasted on pitch day in the case of an unexpected situation).
This sounds very interesting. Make sure you cut down your presentation to make it fit the 5 minute time constraint. My suggestion would be also to get to the product quicker. Present the need and the product clearly and early on! :)
The presentation of the application of the patent was very clear - sounds like you guys are on point with your knowledge of the patent. It's a very interesting addition to the classroom, but I was just wondering which way would be the best way to sell the product. You mentioned that you could sell to parents or teachers or schools. Is one of these ideas better than the others? It would help the investors figure out how fundable the company is.
Hello! I really liked your pitch today. It was relatable, and well-rehearsed. Definitely one of my favorites! I really like the fact that you appeal to customers' emotions to sell your product. Based on your presentation today, I don't have any comments to make other than to advise you to keep practicing to make it flow even better. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteHi! I was not able to see the slides, but I liked how you presented. I think that at the beginning you should say something additional about the team. Is there anything in your team that makes you specially strong? Be careful with the presentation. When there are too many people presenting it can get messy from time to time, so just be careful with that. Overall, excellent work and good luck the Tuesday!
ReplyDeleteJae Seong Yoo thank you for the nice comments! I really enjoyed your presentation as well. Omar, thank you for reminding me to upload the slides. We are still currently finishing up some final touches. As for the introduction to the team, Rick told us to keep it short and save time to use it on our product/go to market strategy. We will clean up the presenting! Pied Piper appreciates the quick feedback.
ReplyDeleteHi! In general, I think the overall flow of the pitch is great. It appears that all of you have a good knowledge of the assigned parts and have alot of things that you want to say. Yet, the clip is a little bit longer than our expected 1+5 minutes pitching. I believe if you take out the time to walk into the screen and other small moments where time was wasted you guys should be fine. But just in case, you might want to reduce the total pitch length as it seems to be wise to have some buffer time (which can be wasted on pitch day in the case of an unexpected situation).
ReplyDeleteHi! I agree with the clip being a bit too long, I think the audience would start to tune out if it wasn't shortened down. Good job overall!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds very interesting. Make sure you cut down your presentation to make it fit the 5 minute time constraint. My suggestion would be also to get to the product quicker. Present the need and the product clearly and early on! :)
ReplyDeleteThe presentation of the application of the patent was very clear - sounds like you guys are on point with your knowledge of the patent. It's a very interesting addition to the classroom, but I was just wondering which way would be the best way to sell the product. You mentioned that you could sell to parents or teachers or schools. Is one of these ideas better than the others? It would help the investors figure out how fundable the company is.
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